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Post by Firena on Nov 11, 2004 4:13:39 GMT -5
Here u can all post ur poems, (selfmade of course) . Or reply to poems already posted, dont be shy ppl. :DMaybe u got a poet inside of u? Am challeging everyone who reads this to make a poem of ur own and post it here. Do u dare?
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Post by Firena on Nov 11, 2004 4:23:35 GMT -5
Ill start of with one of my own than The smallest thing is yet so big when there is you around. With you I fly, above it all, I never touch the ground. So much to tell, so little to say, but words can only give a clue. A look in my eyes, a touch, a smile, is all u need to know its true.
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Post by Tiriyate on Nov 11, 2004 9:05:38 GMT -5
i have two, one i made a year ago, the other a few weeks ago, this ones the year: sew this up with threads of reason and regret so i will not forget, i will not forget how this felt one year six months ago i know i cannot forget, i cannot forget
im falling into memories of you and things we used to do follow me there, a beautiful somewhere a place that i can share with you
i can tell that you dont know me anymore its easy to forget, sometimes we just forget and being on this road is anything but sure maybe we'll forget, i hope we dont forget
so many nights, legs tangled tight wrap me up in a dream with you close up these eyes, try not to cry all that i've got to pull me through is memories of you
weeks:
The ground shakes. The sky falls. The buildings crumble, on the ground. The lands sink, the waters grow tall. The darkness overwhelms all above you. The plants die, people cry. The ground shakes. The trees fall. Your life is growing short, run and fall.. You run longer, stop less. You find no cover. Who can you address? Bombs fly, over your head. You duck and roll. Did they miss? The ground shakes. Waves grow tall, once more. The sky grows black, ash's snow. The ground cracks, you run. No more places, you can no lnoger hide. The world is exploding. Run and hide.
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Post by masmpm on Nov 11, 2004 10:29:01 GMT -5
Well, I have a few songs i wrote like the start of September where my G.F. dumped me (Not Good Fight) I gotta get them from my sister (showing them off to her friends) I'll try and post them, I want some comments
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Post by Firena on Nov 12, 2004 2:21:54 GMT -5
Tiri Thoose poems were nice, i especially like the last one. Really felt like i needed to run when i read it Look forward to see ur songs Mas
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Post by Even on Nov 15, 2004 10:56:21 GMT -5
wow firena/ tiri great poems i won't be posting any myself...im not much of a poet.but i enjoy reading it ;D
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Post by Korax on Nov 15, 2004 16:30:32 GMT -5
[shadow=blue,left,300][glow=blue,2,300]And I Lay Weeping[/glow][/shadow] [glow=green,2,300]A Korax Original[/glow] As I swam in the Sea of Despair, Nothing but darkness beneath the surface, I lay weeping.
As I waded through the Swamps of Misery, Not a glimmer of sunlight in the sky, I lay grieving.
As I crossed the Plains of Pondering, The winds gusting with intrigue, I lay thinking.
As I entered the Forest of Hope, Leaves brustling with a new beginning, I lay believing.
I had traveled across the land just to be with you, But you loved me no more, And I lay weeping.
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Post by Firena on Nov 16, 2004 2:04:32 GMT -5
Cool poem Korax. really sad, and really catching, ur pretty deep arent u? And thanks Even, ill be posting more soon and even though u dont think ur the greatest poet in the world, u should take my challenge and post one here u2. Maybe u discover a hidden talent
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Post by Korax on Nov 17, 2004 19:04:58 GMT -5
ty firena
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Post by Firena on Nov 19, 2004 8:58:11 GMT -5
Time for me to post yet another poem made in boaring school lessons. maybe i should start taking notes instead?
Riddles in philosopy all thoose things i cannot see What is there for u and me?
Seeing the future, learning the past both I will do, but way to fast Is it good or is it bad at last?
I don't know where to go got no clue when to show all i know is that it's love
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Post by Kane on Nov 19, 2004 15:06:34 GMT -5
Im guessing you were in history when u made that poem
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Post by Firena on Nov 20, 2004 1:20:32 GMT -5
Nope, it was in the middle of french class
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Post by Zoharn on Nov 20, 2004 8:56:45 GMT -5
Well im far from the greatest, but heres my effort for someone special. Sitting as one, Feeling so many. Looking at you, Being so pretty. I cannot deny, my feelings inside. Sitting here talking with you, Brings such joy and pride. Your love which can only be seen, Reaches my heart through a lifeless screen. Everyday I'm with you this I see, I'm realizing just how dear you are to me. Being with you I know I have something, But being without you I am nothing. So today I ask this with fear, Hoping your feelings are just as dear. Silverina my dear I hope you comprehend, With you I want to be til the very end. The feelings we share are precious to me, So today I do ask.... Will you Marry me? This has been an ingame proposal by yours truly Zoharn.
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Post by Kane on Nov 20, 2004 11:06:54 GMT -5
Wow... Have you asked in the game yet, and if so, how did she respond?
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Post by ayhsian on Nov 20, 2004 14:27:21 GMT -5
OMG Zoh! Thats so sweet!!! Silver say yes!!!!
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