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Post by Bluecode on Dec 2, 2004 17:10:31 GMT -5
Never say Happy
Life always end for someone It might not be today but one day it well be
You leave the world to the other realm Then u realize did u make your lifefulled dreams
You wish u never would of took the wrong turn Its too late look who u have done its burns inside you
You cry from above but no one can hear you Now you think the world is against you
So you just lie in peace and let the world go around you Its too last now so never think it ends out happy
(I had a lot of time to think of what has happened and this made me think what my brother had did.)
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Post by Kane on Dec 2, 2004 17:22:08 GMT -5
Another good poem on this thread.. Keep them comin all
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Post by Firena on Dec 6, 2004 1:41:13 GMT -5
Mighty grale of never forsaken, another time my love is awaken. Of what I speek i cannot tell, for it's of words i cannot spell. just trying to make a lil poem here, did't get so much but than again it's hard to do pages up and down on just a min.
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Post by Kane on Dec 6, 2004 18:25:30 GMT -5
Really good poem again Fire... I wish i was good @ english to do that
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Post by Firena on Dec 7, 2004 2:10:46 GMT -5
Lolz thanks Kane
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Post by Malkris on Dec 7, 2004 7:06:01 GMT -5
nice, i havent really had time to work on poetry, but my girlfriend seems to have enjoyed the one i wrote to her in her birthday card >.> it was one of thsoe off the top of me head things as well, so i cant remember it for the lfie of me XD
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Post by projectx on Dec 10, 2004 23:07:50 GMT -5
Light Rain
Softly, hesitant footsteps fall upon the altar Overlooking a crimson field bedecked with infinite jewels
Weeping. Glistening dewdrops, tears of heaven, Wet but warm beneath wandering lost feet
Solace for the soles.
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Post by Firena on Dec 11, 2004 2:13:25 GMT -5
WoW Proj thats whonderfull. U have a very good vocabylary(defenatly misspelled), and u use it to a very good extent. I really like that kind of poems short but filled with feelings expressed by great words of something from nature ect. Ur writing really nice, hope to see more of ur poems.
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Post by Kane on Dec 11, 2004 12:07:33 GMT -5
Yes i agree Good poem
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Post by Malkris on Dec 11, 2004 15:15:13 GMT -5
Short, sweet, and d**ned cool dude! *thumbs up*
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Post by Firena on Dec 12, 2004 10:59:38 GMT -5
So light so bright, winds of summernight. Wast heat forsaken love holy lonely mighty crow. thy shall fall, hear my call Majesty I saw. Larger greatness than that of thee, when thus summon thy shalt be, sitting at the table free. Not commanded by the three. Past and present both ignored thou who know it is only bored. Search and thy shall find, whatever is in mind. Bha, this one turned out weird
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Post by Kane on Dec 12, 2004 11:23:08 GMT -5
I agree, it is weird It has old english, and modern english
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Post by Malkris on Dec 12, 2004 13:11:29 GMT -5
Think thats weird, read "To His Coy Mistress" by Andrew Marvel... compared to that, it was coherent as thine queens english
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Post by Firena on Dec 13, 2004 4:37:46 GMT -5
When I said weird i didn't mean the langugae, but the message of my poem... That was weird.
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Post by Firena on Dec 14, 2004 2:54:42 GMT -5
Darkness from whitch I was born, not a shining unicorn, Threads of Ice, burning striking, towards my face, fighting. Of this an emrald perfection, perfection in it's reflection. From whater and earth, a pure one's birth. Shining a star, seen from afar. Not me, not him a faceless grin. Emerged on this last of days, true speaker of the westwind sais. Thou whos name shalt never been recall, from thus words it all shall fall.
This one is not weird, same style but it's feelings r ezer and less complicated, all in all a poem i liked how turned out.
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