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Post by Kane on Dec 14, 2004 6:38:40 GMT -5
Thats good.. and good u feel good about ur poem Keep up the good poems still
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Post by Firena on Dec 14, 2004 10:26:11 GMT -5
Thanks and sure, i just can't stop writing poems... kinda addicted lolz
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Post by Malkris on Dec 14, 2004 10:53:54 GMT -5
Why do I cry When I'm on such a high?
Allow myself to fall Every time I stand tall?
Who can turn me dead Or make my cheeks go red?
Four little words today Is all that she will say
Unlike a pair of doves There is no more love...
Yet another Top-of-the-head Poem from MalkieClaus, expect I think this one totally sucks...
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Post by Firena on Dec 14, 2004 10:56:50 GMT -5
hmmm yeah it's not ur best, but it dosn't suck either... hehe keep writing u young man, u got something going for u i can see it
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Post by Malkris on Dec 14, 2004 11:01:53 GMT -5
I write code, not prose... this is difficult for me...
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Post by Firena on Dec 14, 2004 11:33:45 GMT -5
U manage both styles quite well from what i can see, very good
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Post by Firena on Dec 20, 2004 5:56:25 GMT -5
Long awaiting entisapaiting the fellow band united clan this is us, the Empire look at us, admire!
Hail thee great Empire.. growing bigger and stronger by the minute ;D
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Post by Kane on Dec 20, 2004 17:39:04 GMT -5
Wow.... a poem about empire... Wonder who wrote it
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Post by Firena on Dec 21, 2004 2:04:29 GMT -5
hmmm... a lil guess ME!!
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Post by Kane on Dec 21, 2004 12:20:07 GMT -5
I cant be sure bout that
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Post by Firena on Dec 21, 2004 14:20:27 GMT -5
Hrmf!! Ill ignore sarcastick meaningless posts like that At least i can make poems, more than u can brag about u silly lil crickt wannabe
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Post by Malkris on Dec 21, 2004 17:29:26 GMT -5
Ahem: [shadow=red,left,300] [/shadow]
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Post by chroni on Dec 21, 2004 18:18:24 GMT -5
To be or not to be, Shakesphere has said, While ecstacy, Was kicking in, for us to see, on just how deep, his poetry, came form underneath.
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Post by Kane on Dec 21, 2004 23:36:35 GMT -5
how did u do that malk??
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Post by Malkris on Dec 22, 2004 5:10:36 GMT -5
Told you, I write code not prose, and that was a very... interesting poem Chroni
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