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Post by Tiriyate1 on Nov 25, 2004 8:11:54 GMT -5
congrats Zoh and Silv gl to you in the future, i will try and make it to the wedding
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Post by Gnist on Nov 25, 2004 9:37:02 GMT -5
Grats Firena & Zoharn!
But remember, if there is love, there is hate.
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Post by masmpm on Nov 25, 2004 10:19:42 GMT -5
Erg... I feel so left out... I keep forgettin to get the songs from my sis.... she doesnt come home till like 4-7 pm at night
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Post by satinsfire on Nov 25, 2004 23:27:27 GMT -5
Im allergic to poetry
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Post by Firena on Nov 26, 2004 2:12:31 GMT -5
o:O Satin that would make u allergic to me
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Post by projectx on Nov 28, 2004 20:26:16 GMT -5
When you try to remember, you find you cannot... When you try to forget, you remember a lot.
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Post by Kane on Nov 28, 2004 21:29:24 GMT -5
Small, But a good poem. And also makes sense
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Post by Firena on Dec 1, 2004 2:48:31 GMT -5
Time for another one of my poems hope ull like it cause it is my reason of exist to create poetry... well something like that, anyway here it goes It felt as if they had left beneath destony. No longer tied by the fierce of the world. An eternal sunrise in the gardens of forever. Lost from time and space, joined by pure love. Swaped in glory, forgetting the cruelty of their past lifes. Finally reaching their goal, The white shores of heaven. This i wrote a few years ago, at a time when i recived alot from God.. belive it or not but thats what i did. i tried to put words on how i think the end of the world and the entering of the new would be. Somehow i feel that there is truth to it , but i really need some respond on it. So plz ppl, tell me what u think
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Post by Kane on Dec 1, 2004 6:49:38 GMT -5
Really good poem,
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Post by Malkris on Dec 1, 2004 13:41:06 GMT -5
I'd post some of my poems... but... theyre kinda depressin cos i wrote em just after my last break up
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Post by Firena on Dec 1, 2004 13:54:41 GMT -5
lolz... depressive poems r somehow ofthan the best ones, i got lots but am to happy to post them atm
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Post by Malkris on Dec 1, 2004 14:02:35 GMT -5
let me c wot i can come up with then... this is just off da top of me head u kno On day one With sky so bright, She said yes, My heart took flight. On day two Our love just grew But on day three It fell like a tree. On daY four My eyes did pour. It was plain to see She did not want me. By day nine, Life was fine She was gone And by day ten I never had to see her again. This is just a short poem to symbolise how the relationship went with me and my last girlfriend. Each "day" is in actually fact a month in the relationship.
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Post by Firena on Dec 2, 2004 1:07:10 GMT -5
Awww!! Malk thats beautiful, really beautifull If thats just what u got in ur head now am dying to see what u can make if u take ur time to do it the long way... Wasn't that depressive though, kinda had an happy ending to it ill say, hehe more girls will come ur way.
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Post by Malkris on Dec 2, 2004 13:15:04 GMT -5
it only had a happy ending because the girl it was about is a total [insert 4 hours of abuse here] cow...
that and i wasn't actually depressed when i though it up ^_^
I'll see what i can cook up though, might have some good stuff in my head somewhere.
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Post by Kane on Dec 2, 2004 14:51:38 GMT -5
Gl with the poetry malkris
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