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Post by Firena on Feb 6, 2005 3:27:02 GMT -5
WoW What can I say?... Ur muse moust have been working doubleshifts last night, and she sure did a good job to Pretty sad poems, i can tell there is a real story behind them all, but am not gonna ask u what, (even tho it's very tempting lolz). Those poems r in style a lil more similliar to those i write on Zen, (the link in my sig). For some reason i don't feel like writing sad one's in a place where i have so much fun... All in all tho.. it's still a romantic english style. U just made it from tha dark side to, if i can say that. Each night, when I go to sleep beside me i see u I look into those deep dazzling eyes I feel ur touch on my body I taste your lips on mine Than I fall asleep, knowing that ur there whatching over me I have the best of dreams I know that you are there I can feel u nare Than as I wake up the cruel light of the sun from the little opening between the curtains tell the truh You were never really there... Each morning as you fade away am longing for that day When you will still be next to me when the sun will let u stay. Yes it is about my bf ... Haven't tried this type of poem any much be4, but it dosn't sound to bad does it?
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Post by Malkris on Feb 6, 2005 6:07:56 GMT -5
Ask away, doesn't mean you'll get an answer It's a good poem... sounds like something I'd write if looking at love like that didn't hurt so much =/ Once my main project is done, I'll post it here first (as opposed to on the TG forum where I think I posted those ones first). It's pretty much my usual style, with a bit of a gothic twist... should be interesting to say the least.
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Post by Firena on Feb 7, 2005 3:10:26 GMT -5
Thanks Malk Am in a writing mood theese days, skipping gym atm lolz, so lets see what i can make up. A little shiny star on the heaven late at night A memory of days those were once so bright Sweet drops of rain falling higt from the sky Washes all the pain away making angels cry Breeze so hard painfull, always cold Sings the words of dark memories old Bha.. not good, trying to write a happy poem here and end up with this
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Post by Forgery on Feb 9, 2005 21:03:06 GMT -5
lalalala good voice huh? ;D
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Post by chroni on Feb 9, 2005 22:20:06 GMT -5
Forge, this is really wierd, your wierdself answered every thread, your selfness is feared.
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Post by Firena on Feb 10, 2005 4:13:01 GMT -5
o.O Chroni can rhyme in other ways than just of rap.. bha ur still only dizzing others
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Post by chroni on Feb 10, 2005 12:26:05 GMT -5
rofl
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Post by Firena on Mar 11, 2005 7:21:29 GMT -5
Time for some more poetry.. this thread is dying and i wont let it A gentle hand from one who dosn't underdstand A funny smile from one who will stay a while A head thinking from one who sees me deeper sinking Dead roses, past glory invan no loner will they cry in pain Black beauty.. so lost, betrayed wicked feelings, future delayed On standstill, nothing nothing abrupting If I could push play for that I always pray. Once again, bored at school, waiting for that stupid buss to come... Oh well.. it's ok aslong as I got a comp
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Post by chroni on Mar 11, 2005 12:33:47 GMT -5
lol u crazy, pinning poetry corner?!?!?!
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~ Chroni ~
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Post by Firena on Mar 11, 2005 17:49:47 GMT -5
ofcourse i pinned it.. it's one thread here to stay
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Post by azazir on Mar 13, 2005 14:52:26 GMT -5
hmm me do poetry....i doubt the succes of that well lets see what i got. Cold and empty, hurt and sore i pray to god to feel no more i pray for love and to hurt no more but all i get is hurt once more i pray for the night eternally dark, to smother my soul so lonely and stark i pray for the emptyness hidden within, to save me from your love covered with sin i pray for the light shining and bright, to banish dark memories and drive away night i pray for the love you once showed me before, please say you love me don't walk out the door. errr well i guess someone might class it as poetry i dunno, let me know what you think
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Post by Firena on Mar 14, 2005 3:08:32 GMT -5
i pray for the night eternally dark, to smother my soul so lonely and stark i pray for the emptyness hidden within, to save me from your love covered with sin Theese to lines r very good, i like the poem, a bit heave to read. U lack rythm and flow, but that comes with pracktise. I wont laught, just cause u said i so *surpressing a laughter* Nono nvm that, it's not bad at all... make some more I wanna see what u got
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Post by azazir on Mar 14, 2005 17:51:20 GMT -5
i'll see what i can piece together lol i probally won't be on till thursday so i'll cya all then have fun without me
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Post by masmpm on Mar 14, 2005 20:09:16 GMT -5
meh hello all poetry corner is not really my thing but... i have a poetry portfolio from skoo, i have this long: poem of "the reaper" i think it was an imagery poem everything rhymes and im too lazy to type it
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Post by Firena on Mar 15, 2005 2:08:46 GMT -5
thats just stupid... c'mon i u got a poem type it down
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